strangeseraph (strangeseraph) wrote in mavo,
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Updates to my fic...

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I just printed out your fanfic and I'm so excited to read it. I was surprised that only you've posted on the MAVO site since I last did in Nov. Thanks for the update. It's totally exciting :)
I love the story "Trust" but does it have an end that raps up the story? I read it all in one day and before I post any comments or suggestions, I really want to know if it has an end?!?! Please let me know becasue I'm hooked! Btw, thanks for spending the time to put this all together and for staying with the story from the show. I love some of the connections you've drawn between your story line and that which already was developed in the cartoon. And subtle things like Katy signing instead of talking in quotes for her one line made me smile. If you want I could post my reflections on your writing. I noted a few things that were great and a few that struck me as not as well thought out as the rest of the story line. But over all I LOVE IT!!! You've made a Teddy fan very happy
Yep, its gonna have an ending, I actually have an end in mind but its quite a ways away, lots more still to write.

Glad you're liking it, feel free to post comments, criticisms, ideas, but no flames. Its the only way I can improve my writing. :)
I'm going to read your new chapter, but I had some massive problems on the fanfiction.net site. For some reason, when I go to the scroll down bar for the chapters, right away I get pop ups that try to give me a virus. I know it's not your doing, but figured I'd let you know since you have both sites posted.

Also I don't know what you meant by "no flames." I'm not a regular fanfic reader by any means, so if you could clarify it would be much appreciated. This way I can post some comments when I'm done with Chapter 19. Thanks! I'm excited to read more.
That would be the ads from fanfiction.net and I can't control that. My advise to you would be to get an adblocker for your web browser. Firefox and Chrome have great ones, I don't know if IE does, but I use adblock and it gets rid of a great portion of ads and popups.

To flame means to leave an angry insulting post. I don't mind critique, but I prefer civil reviews to harassing ones.

Thanks for reading my story, I hope you're enjoying it!
I can't believe I didn't leave you a comment here 'til now! Anyway, I don't remember if I reviewed on fanfiction.net or not, but I'm EcclecticMe over there. I just wanted to say ho much I love this story and miss it! Good TR fanfics are hard to find, so thanks for putting yours up!